This can’t be good. Noooooooooooooooo, sir.
Not sure about the bottom panels. Recently I’ve been noticing how stiff a lot of my poses are, I wish I could get some sense of fluidity and motion into my characters. Sometimes I got it, sometimes I don’t. Oh well, gotta put the pages out.










Very creative use of color and I really like the way that you don’t limit yourself to the standard graphic shape of a page but rather stretch the boundaries of the page to expand your story. Nice!